Pitch Evaluation

Evaluation

In the pitch of our short film I talked about four slides out of the twelve that we produced. The four slides that I done I will list below. These four slides were decided through negotiation with my group members.

• Genre
• Social Groups
• Location
• Marketing and advertisement

Personally I believe that I didn't present it as well as I could off. There are things in my performance in which I think there is room for improvement. Also I believe that there was some information in my performance which wasn’t included.

Firstly I discussed the genre of the short film. I believe that I didn’t explain these genres too well and I didn’t give clear enough reasons to why we picked these certain genres. My group and I decided to do a sub-genre which consisted of violence and thriller. I think that in order for me to improve how I explained this slide I should be able to explain why we’ve chosen these genres and also why we decided to a sub-genre and why we didn’t do just one genre.

Secondly I discussed the social groups of this short film.  I believe that I delivered this slide decently but there is still room for improvement. In this slide I talked about the target audience which we aimed this short film at. I believe I could off explained why we chose these groups. Also in this slide I said that there will be some uses and gratifications included. I said that the short film would offer escapism and personal identification. I believe that I could off explained why we chose escapism and what escapism offers to the audience. I believe that I should off explained why I targeted these certain ethnicity and what other ethnicity this short film could apply too. I believe that I could off given distinction between who our primary audience is and who our secondary audience is.

Thirdly I discussed the locations which we were going to use for this short film. I personally believe that I didn’t perform this slide very well. I believed that I didn’t explain clearly enough why we chose these locations. I believe that in order for me to improve this scene I would need to make it clear to the audience why I picked these locations and what’s special about them or whether they have a background. I believe that if I describe these things I would be able to improve this section of my performance.

The final slide which I presented for my group was the marketing and advertisement for the film. I believe that I did this slide quite well. In this slide I showed the audience examples of the kind of ways we tend to advertise our film. I believe I explained well why social networking sites would be beneficial to our short film. However I believe I could off given more examples off where we would deploy our posters for the film.  Also I believe that I could off talked about why we picked these certain social networks.